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Hi guys =)

Today I and my sister have booked the tickets to Stockholm for the Spring break. It will be so much fun!!
We are going to visit our oldest sister, who lives in Stockholm. She, the oldest sister, is going to be married this summer so when me and my sister (who I going to Stockholm with) is in Stockholm we all three are going to look for wedding-things :) It will be so much fun and I really look forward to the spring break! :D

Tomorrow I am free from my school so I am going to visit my old class in Waldorf. So it will be really fun to see them all! :)

Have a good night =)

2010-02-16 @ 21:00:06 Allmänt Permalink

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Postat av: Indra

What do I say?:

"Me and my sister"

or

"I and my sister"

2010-02-16 @ 21:01:58
URL: http://pinocchiooo.blogg.se/

Postat av: frida

me and my sister would sound better ;)

"It will be so much fun!!"

wouldn't it sound better with

"We will have so much fun!!"

"is going to be married"

should be

is getting married

I think the text was good, even though it got a little massed up in my head with all your sisters xD

2010-02-19 @ 19:35:46
URL: http://seriouslyfrida.blogg.se/

Postat av: Sigrid

"..so when me and my sister (who I going to Stockholm with) is in Stockholm we all three are going to look for wedding-things :)"

so when me and my sister (the one I am traveling with)visiting Stockholm the three of us aree going to look for wedding related stuffs :).

"Tomorrow I am free from my school so.."

Tomorrow I have one day off from school so..s

"So it will be really fun.."

Sounds very swenglish. No need to have a "so" there.

And, I also want to visiting Sthlm! :)

2010-02-20 @ 10:33:18
URL: http://dearthofideas.blogg.se/

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